Writing Tips and Film Critique

How to Edit for Better Pacing and Storytelling Part 3

Here it is, the final part of my video series on The Matrix Reloaded and The Matrix Revolutions. You can find Part 1 here and Part 2 here. I hope you enjoy! šŸ™‚ And yes, Iā€™m already working on a video on Star Wars Episode I: The Phantom Menace. My next three videos (maybe four)… Continue reading How to Edit for Better Pacing and Storytelling Part 3

Writing Tips and Film Critique

How to Edit for Better Pacing and Storytelling Part 2

Part 2 of my video series on merging The Matrix Reloaded and The Matrix Revolutions into a single film is now live (you can find Part 1 here). In it, I show how cutting unneeded information from the film, such as The Merovingian's causality talk, strengthens that specific scene and the character at the heart… Continue reading How to Edit for Better Pacing and Storytelling Part 2

Poetry

Trying

I try. I try to do the things, the things other people do, do to feel right. Right? I try. I buy. They tell me to buy for myself. For myself, I share to try. I try. I try to share, but does anyone care, care to understand why, why I try, why I don't… Continue reading Trying